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43 minutes and 43 seconds ago

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Forty three minutes and forty three seconds ago
The world was at peace, She came here and darkness sank in.
The monks started fighting, and the trees all turned grey.
The wind stopped it's motions and stopped the trees sway.

Her foot touched the ground and silenced the world.
children went missing and parents were torn.
Because forty three minutes ago, the world was at its norm.
Forty three seconds ago, we felt the cold turn warm.

Her voice like nails, on a chalkboard
Her eyes like lightning bolts
Her hair was alive
Her story untold.

She moved through the earth
Killing it's species
Not knowing where she came from
She made it look easy.

forty three minutes ago, I watched children playing
forty three seconds ago, I saw bodies laying
In stone, engraved on every male being....
They knew who she was...
Without even seeing,
So, I'm in a rut and amongstars [link]

Decided to give me a topic. Which was 43 minutes and 43 seconds.
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Astrikos's avatar
Very good imagery here. :w00t:
I love the power and descriptions.
I only suggest capitalizing children in the 2nd stanza, second line.

The form is lovely. :clap: